Tuesday, 30 June 2020

Poem's

Hello,
I made 2 poem's here is the first one
here is the other one
blog you later,
🐹Lila🐹 

8 comments:

  1. Ka pai Lila. I enjoyed your rhyming in both poems.What was the most challenging part?

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    1. Kia Ora Phil. Thanks for your comment. A challenge that I faced when completing this task was finding names which started with those letter's.

      Have you tried something like this before?

      Blog you later,
      Lila🐹

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  2. Kia Ora, my name is Helen and I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka District School. I really like your blog post about "your peom". You're really good at rhyming words. I've never made a poem but I've made a limerick. I think you put the letter "I" at the beggining.

    Thanks for sharing your learning, if you want to got to my blog click here.
    Blog you later,
    by Helen.

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    1. Kia Ora Helen. Thanks for your comment. A challenge that I faced when completing this task was finding names which started with those letter's.

      Have you tried something like this before?

      Blog you later,
      Lila🐹

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  3. Kia Ora Lila. I really liked your poems it was very interesting and fun. Do you have anymore poems? Make sure to check out
    My Blog

    That is all for now!
    Blog you later!

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    1. Kia Ora Palak. Thanks for your comment. A challenge that I faced when completing this task was finding names which started with those letter's.

      Have you tried something like this before?

      Blog you later,
      Lila🐹

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  4. Kia Ora Lila. My name is Angela from Room 23. I liked your blog post about your poem's I like when you use your name too and is Isla Lily and Amy your friends?
    Blog you later.
    You should check out My blog

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    1. Kia Ora Angela. Thanks for your comment. A challenge that I faced when completing this task was finding names which started with those letter's.

      Have you tried something like this before?

      Blog you later,
      Lila🐹

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