hello,
Here is my story we have been doing over lock down
This was to be another of his incredible adventures,
and he couldn’t wait to find out where it would take
him then he saw the biggest fan he had ever seen so
he screamed as loud as he had ever screamed before
, when he saw the flying human with toilet paper wings
he screeched as loud as he had ever screeched in his life.
Because he was a scientist he was figuring out how this
was possible, he put the pros of how this could work and
the cons as how this could not work, he finished doing the
chart in his head and he could not belive it there were more
pros than cons he was about to try and think of some more
cons when he saw a big brown bear and he screamed even
louder than last time. He was in a big mystery world where he
had never actually met anyone, not even the fairy that was taking
him to see their Queen if she even was a fairy or she even had a Queen.
So on his way the skys turned brown and grey and then a
river came out of nowhere and now he was in a land and could
not get out.
and he couldn’t wait to find out where it would take
him then he saw the biggest fan he had ever seen so
he screamed as loud as he had ever screamed before
, when he saw the flying human with toilet paper wings
he screeched as loud as he had ever screeched in his life.
Because he was a scientist he was figuring out how this
was possible, he put the pros of how this could work and
the cons as how this could not work, he finished doing the
chart in his head and he could not belive it there were more
pros than cons he was about to try and think of some more
cons when he saw a big brown bear and he screamed even
louder than last time. He was in a big mystery world where he
had never actually met anyone, not even the fairy that was taking
him to see their Queen if she even was a fairy or she even had a Queen.
So on his way the skys turned brown and grey and then a
river came out of nowhere and now he was in a land and could
not get out.
The end
By Lila Lindsay
hope you liked it!
what did you mostly do over lock down?
blog you later,
🐹Lila🐹
Kia ora Lila. I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the alliteration of 'big brown bear.' It sounds like there might be a part two? Next time if you're pasting from a doc try ctrl-shift-v and then your work will fit on the page a bit neater. Keep up the blogging!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Phil,
Deletethank you for reading my blog.
Yea I just logged on today and I am doing the school online on tvnz but the thing which is going on right not is not very fun so I desided to check my blog and I saw that so now I fixed it.
All the best,
blog you later,
Lila
Hi Lila Matilda here.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your post about writing. I have done it to. Just a tip mabye try and make your writing all on one page so it would be easier to read. Hope that you are enjoying lock down.
Bye, Matilda.
Kia ora Matilda.
DeleteThank you for reading my story.
Yea I just logged at about 8:30 and I am doing the school on tvnz right now but I decided becuase they are reading a book so I would just lissen.
yea I noticed that I fixed it hope you liked it.
stay safe,
blog you later,
Lila
Lila you have a great imagination...toilet paper wings!!!! Brilliant that you have taken up Phil's suggestion.
ReplyDeleteI hope you and your family are doing some interesting walks, I have walked around some streets that I have never walked before in my neighbourhood!