Friday, 31 July 2020

✨The magic escalator✨

Hello,
Here is my story about  a girl and an escalator. I made this yesterday and it was fun to make. I chose to do horror and our focus was to add a simile in our writting.
Hope you enjoy!
Hope you liked it?
If you did you could comment and say what you like and what you think I could do better next time!

🐹LILA OUT🐹

1 comment:

  1. Hi Lila it is Mikayla from room 7.
    so I really like your story. My favorite part was when she made friends with the animals I love animals. But next time you could check some of your spelling. I might of found 2 or 1 words that were not spelled. But it is fine blog you later
    BYE!!!🐾😜

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